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Edit means recipe readers don't have to go to the linked textual annotations recipe to understand what's different in this one

recipe/0489-multimedia-canvas/index.md

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 This recipe pulls together techniques and structures described in other recipes, and adds new elements. In other recipes, this cookbook shows [how to place multiple resources on a single Canvas][0036] and how to work with [a resource with different dimensions than its Canvas][0004]. In the Use Case for this recipe, the aim is to mix AV and image IIIF resources, set an image to be visible for an amount of time, and resize and position an AV resource on a Canvas.
 
-While other recipes have discussed [simple textual annotations][0266], this recipe changes the motivation for its textual annotations to `painting` to include the text directly and visibly on the Canvas. Each of the annotations in this recipe is bound both by its placement on the Canvas and by its time of visibility.
+While other recipes have discussed [simple textual annotations][0266], this recipe uses a `painting` motivation for its textual annotations (rather than `commenting` as in that recipe) to include the text directly and visibly on the Canvas. Each of the annotations in this recipe is bound both by its placement on the Canvas and by its time of visibility.
 
 When using timing for showing and hiding resources on a Canvas, a high degree of precision is not likely to be achieved for all people viewing the Canvas. Resources may load slowly for many reasons, including on the IIIF image server side, for network traffic reasons, or from customizations in a person's browser. Except in a very predictable environment, timing should be considered approximate