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[step5] 자동차 경주(리팩터링) #1752

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@Saerang Saerang commented Nov 24, 2024

아래에 대해서 리팩터링을 진행해봤습니다.
Input, Output 도 분리하였습니다.

  • 타입추론 추가
  • 필드 외부 노출

이번 미션 하면서, 생성자나, static, 타입추론, 필드 노출 등 많은 이해가 된 것 같습니다.
미션 도움 주셔서 감사합니다 :)

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안녕하세요!

step5 빠르게 잘 구현해주셨네요 💯
몇가지 코멘트를 남겼으니 확인부탁드립니다~!

package racingcar.view

object InputView {
fun carNames(): String {
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함수명은 동사형으로 작성해주면 어떨까요?

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enterCarNames 나 setCarNames 등 할 수 있긴한데, Class 자체가 Input을 하는애들이기 때문에 InputView.carNames() 에 의미가 어느정도 있다고 생각을 하는데. 어떻게 생각하시나요?!


fun roundCount(): Int {
println("시도할 횟수는 몇 회인가요?")
return readln().toInt()
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toInt()는 숫자가 들어오지 않으면 에러를 내뱉는데요!! toIntOrNull을 활용해서 숫자가 아닌 값을입력했을때의 에러처리를 고민해보면 어떨까요?

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저기서 숫자가 아니면 number format expetion이 터지겠군요. 클라이언트한테 친절한 메시지를 주는게 좋겠네요!

fun cars(): List<Car> {
return cars
}

companion object {
fun usernames(usernames: String): Cars {
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정적 팩토리 메서드 네이밍 컨벤션을 읽어보고, 네이밍에 대해 고민해보면 어떨까요?

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val positions: MutableList<Position> = ArrayList()
for (car in cars) {
positions.add(car.position())
positions.add(car.position)
}
return positions
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kotlin collection에서 지원하는 map을 이용해서 코드를 조금 더 간결하게 짤 수 있을 것 같아요!! 고민한번 해보면 좋을 것 같습니다 :)

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오 엄청 단순화 되겠네요!

println("시도할 횟수는 몇 회인가요?")
val round: Int = readln().toInt()
val usernames = InputView.carNames()
val round = InputView.roundCount()

val cars = Cars.usernames(usernames)
repeat(round) {
cars.race(RandomNumberGenerator())
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RandomNumberGenerator는 싱글톤 객체로 만들 수 있지 않을까요?

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싱글톤 객체가 필요한 이유가 있을까요?!
메모리적인 이득이나, 다양한 이점이 있을 것 같긴하네요.

import racingcar.domain.Cars
import racingcar.domain.Winners

object OutputView {
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outView에 Car객체를 리턴하게 되면 View레벨에서 Car 객체 안에있는 함수를 실행할 수 있을 것 같아요 :)
DTO를 활용해보면 어떨까요?

fun gameWinner(cars: Cars) {
val winners = Winners(cars)
val winnersName = winners.getWinnerNames().joinToString(",")
println(winnersName + "가 최종 우승했습니다.")
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kotlin의 String templates을 활용해보면 어떨까요?

}

fun gameWinner(cars: Cars) {
val winners = Winners(cars)
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Winner를 구하는게 View의 역할일까요? Cars에 있어도 좋을 것 같아요 :)

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package racingcar.domain

class Car(private var position: Position, private val username: String) {
class Car(var position: Position, val username: String) {
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position의 setter도 public으로 열리게된 것 같아요!

https://ksabs.tistory.com/247

위 글을 읽어보고 프로퍼티의 setter는 private으로 막아보면 어떨까요?

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