[Help] Corrections for the in-app help.

lib/cloud/Entity/Component/Physicalhoster0.pm

@@ -116,15 +116,15 @@ sub getManagerParamsDef {
             pattern      => '^\d*$',
             is_mandatory => 1,
             order        => 1,
-            description  => 'Required number of Core',
+            description  => 'Required number of CPU cores',
         },
         ram => {
             label        => 'Required RAM amount',
             type         => 'integer',
             unit         => 'byte',
             pattern      => '^\d*$',
             is_mandatory => 1,
-            description  => 'Required RAM amount',
+            description  => 'Required amount of RAM',
             order        => 2,
         },
         tags => {
@@ -133,17 +133,17 @@ sub getManagerParamsDef {
             relation     => 'multi',
             is_mandatory => 0,
             order        => 3,
-            description  => 'HCM offer tag system to filter resources. You can filter per datacenter'.
-                            ' or per users or per functionalities. Mandatorys tag are inclusive tags',
+            description  => 'HCM offers a tag system to filter resources. You can filter per datacenter'.
+                            ' or per users or per functionalities. Mandatory tags are inclusive tags.',
         },
         no_tags => {
             label        => 'Forbidden Tags',
             type         => 'enum',
             relation     => 'multi',
             is_mandatory => 0,
             order        => 4,
-            description  => 'HCM offer tag system to filter resources. You can filter per datacenter '.
-                            'or per users or per functionalities. Mandatorys tag are exclusive tags',
+            description  => 'HCM offers a tag system to filter resources. You can filter per datacenter '.
+                            'or per users or per functionalities. Forbidden tags are exclusive tags.',
         },
     };
 }

lib/cloud/Entity/Component/Virtualization.pm

@@ -43,30 +43,30 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         type        => 'relation',
         relation    => 'single_multi',
         is_editable => 1,
-        description => 'It is the vm images repositories',
+        description => 'Where VM images are stored',
     },
     hypervisors => {
         label       => 'Hypervisors',
         type        => 'relation',
         relation    => 'single_multi',
         is_editable => 1,
-        description => 'It is the list of hypervisor in this virtualisation manager',
+        description => 'The list of hypervisors in this virtualisation manager',
     },
     overcommitment_cpu_factor => {
         label        => 'Overcommitment cpu factor',
         type         => 'integer',
         pattern      => '^\d*\.?\d+$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 0,
-        description  => 'Set a ratio for the CPU Overcommitment',
+        description  => 'Set a ratio for CPU Overcommitment',
     },
     overcommitment_memory_factor => {
         label        => 'Overcommitment memory factor',
         type         => 'integer',
         pattern      => '^\d*\.?\d+$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 0,
-        description  => 'Set a ratio for the memory Overcommitment',
+        description  => 'Set a ratio for Memory Overcommitment',
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Host.pm

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^[0-9\.]*$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 0,
-        description  => 'It is the manager of this host (IaaS for a vm, BladeManager for a blade, ...)',
+        description  => 'The manager of this host (IaaS for a VM, BladeManager for a blade, ...)',
     },
     hostmodel_id => {
         label        => 'Board model',
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^\d*$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'Some servers need specific Kernel, if it is your case, choose one',
+        description  => 'Some servers need a specific kernel. If this is your case, choose one.',
     },
     host_serial_number => {
         label        => 'Serial number',
@@ -83,14 +83,14 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
         description  => 'This is your UUID, it identifies your server.' .
-                        ' It could be your internal id, the vendor id, ...',
+                        ' It could be your internal ID, the vendor ID, ...',
     },
     host_desc => {
         label        => 'Description',
         type         => 'text',
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
-        description  => 'Describe your host here. Where is it rack ? DC, room, chassis, ...',
+        description  => 'Describe your host here. Where is its rack? DC, room, chassis, ...',
         is_editable  => 1,
     },
     active => {
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
     },
     host_ram => {
         label        => 'RAM capability',
-        description  => 'Amount of Ram on the server',
+        description  => 'Amount of RAM in the server',
         type         => 'integer',
         unit         => 'byte',
         pattern      => '^\d*$',
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
     },
     host_core => {
         label        => 'CPU capability',
-        description  => 'number of Core in your server (CPU x Core x Hyperthreading)',
+        description  => 'Total number of cores in your server (CPU x Core x Hyperthreading)',
         type         => 'integer',
         unit         => 'core(s)',
         pattern      => '^\d*$',
@@ -140,30 +140,30 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         relation     => 'single_multi',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'add the different network interfaces of your server',
+        description  => 'Add the different network interfaces of your server.',
     },
     harddisks => {
         label        => 'Hard disks',
         type         => 'relation',
         relation     => 'single_multi',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'add the different hard disks of your server',
+        description  => 'Add the different hard disks of your server.',
     },
     ipmi_credentials => {
         label        => 'IPMI',
         type         => 'relation',
         relation     => 'single_multi',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'add your ipmi credentials, HCM will be able to start and stop your server',
+        description  => 'Add your IPMI credentials, HCM will be able to start and stop your server.',
     },
     admin_ip => {
-        label        => 'Administration ip',
+        label        => 'Administration IP',
         is_virtual   => 1,
     },
     remote_session_url => {
-        label        => 'Remote session url',
+        label        => 'Remote session URL',
         is_virtual   => 1,
     },
 };
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ sub methods {
             description => 'remove an interface from this host',
         },
         addIface => {
-            description => 'add one or more interface to  this host',
+            description => 'add one or more interfaces to this host',
         },
     };
 }

lib/cloud/Entity/Iface.pm

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is Iface name, it is the name of the interface in your linux system (eg. eth0)',
+        description  => 'The name of the interface in your Linux system (eg. "eth0")',
     },
     iface_mac_addr => {
         label        => 'MAC address',
@@ -46,31 +46,31 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
                         '[0-9a-fA-F]{2}:[0-9a-fA-F]{2}:[0-9a-fA-F]{2}$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'this is the mac adress of your network interface, it is really important for PXE'.
-                        ' iface (grub file will be generated with this identifier',
+        description  => 'The MAC address of your network interface. It is essential for the PXE'.
+                        ' interface, as it will be included in GRUB and DHCP configurations',
     },
     iface_pxe => {
         label        => 'PXE enabled',
         type         => 'boolean',
         pattern      => '^[01]$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'Is this interface will be use to boot on pxe ?',
+        description  => 'Will this interface be used to boot through PXE?',
     },
     host_id => {
         type         => 'relation',
         relation     => 'single',
         pattern      => '^\d+$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
-        description  => 'this is the host identifier of the server hosting this network interface',
+        description  => 'The host identifier of the server with this network interface',
     },
     master => {
         type         => 'string',
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'Master field allow to specify which iface is master for bonding configuration.'.
-                        'It is also used for route',
+        description  => 'You can specify which interface is the master in a bonding configuration.'.
+                        ' It is also used for routing.',
     },
     netconf_ifaces => {
         label        => 'Network configurations',
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         link_to      => 'netconf',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description => 'Choose network topology plugged on this interface',
+        description => 'Choose the network topology plugged on this interface.',
     }
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Netconf.pm

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
         description  => 'Netconf Name. A netconf is the configuration of a network interface.'.
-                        'It can be composed by vlans associated with ip pool',
+                        ' It can be composed by VLANs associated with an IP pool.',
     },
     netconf_vlans => {
         label        => 'VLANs',
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         link_to      => 'vlan',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'Vlans attached to the network interface',
+        description  => 'VLANs attached to the network interface',
     },
     netconf_poolips => {
         label        => 'Pools IPs',
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the role assigned to the network interface (bridge for vm (vm),'.
-                        ' load balancing interface (public), private network (private)',
+        description  => 'The role assigned to the network interface - bridge for VM (vm),'.
+                        ' load balancing interface (public), private network (private).',
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/NetconfRole.pm

@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the role assigned to the network interface (bridge for vm (vm),'.
-                        ' load balancing interface (public), private network (private)',
+        description  => 'The role assigned to the network interface - bridge for VM (vm),'.
+                        ' load balancing interface (public), private network (private).',        
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Network.pm

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the network address (eg. 10.0.0.0 or 172.23.32.128)',
+        description  => 'The network address (e.g. 10.0.0.0 or 172.23.32.128)',
     },
     network_netmask => {
         label        => 'Netmask',
@@ -59,17 +59,16 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'Gateway is an optional parameter to specify '.
-                        'what is the ip of the gateway on this network',
+        description  => 'This optional parameter specifies the gateway IP on this network',
     },
     poolips => {
-        label        => 'Pools Ip',
+        label        => 'IP pools',
         type         => 'relation',
         relation     => 'single_multi',
         is_mandatory => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the list of ip pools available on this network.'.
-                        'This pools will be used by HCM to assigned ip adress to service instances',
+        description  => 'The list of IP pools available on this network.'.
+                        'These pools will be used by HCM to assign IP addresses to service instances.',
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Poolip.pm

@@ -43,21 +43,21 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '.*',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-	description  => 'This is the name of the ip pool'
+	description  => 'Here you can give a name to this IP pool.'
     },
     poolip_first_addr => {
         label        => 'First Address',
         pattern      => '^[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}\.[0-9]{1,3}$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-	description  => 'This is the first available ip that could be attached to vm',
+	description  => 'The first available IP that could be attached to a VM',
     },
     poolip_size => {
         label        => 'Size',
         pattern      => '[0-9]{1,2}',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-	description  => 'This is the number of available ip in the ip pool',
+	description  => 'The number of available IPs in the pool',
     },
     network_id => {
         label        => 'Network',
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^\d*$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-	description  => 'This is the physical network hosting this ip pool'
+	description  => 'The physical network hosting this IP pool'
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Repository.pm

@@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         pattern      => '^.*$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the name of the vm image repository',
+        description  => 'The name of the VM image repository or VM images',
     },
     container_access_id => {
         label        => 'Container access',
         type         => 'relation',
         relation     => 'single',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the export used for the vm image repository',
+        description  => 'The export used for the VM image repository',
     },
 };
 

lib/cloud/Entity/Vlan.pm

@@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ use constant ATTR_DEF => {
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_extended  => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the name of the vlan (use to find the vlan in the topology building)'.
-                        ' (eg admin, sdn, public, ...)',
+        description  => 'You can give a name to this VLAN (used to find the VLAN in the topology, '.
+                        'e.g. admin, sdn, public, ...)',
     },
     vlan_number => {
         label        => 'Number',
         pattern      => '^\d*$',
         is_mandatory => 1,
         is_extended  => 0,
         is_editable  => 1,
-        description  => 'It is the Vlan id',
+        description  => 'The VLAN ID',
     },
 };